Sunday, April 20, 2008

i am so young

i just went to shave
and i looked at my face
my hair is mussed from sleeping and not showering
and i saw myself in my face
just as i have always been
and i missed me
i wished i was who i am
but that i can never be.

3 comments:

Kelley said...

Last night Jasson and I were talking about this poem. I like it a lot.

I read this short story on deviantart and thought that you might like it too:
In A Bar Around Saturn

Doug said...

Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you liked it :)

And that was a good story, very good writing, how it's all from one point of view. I do enjoy my sci-fi.

Hey do you guys have a date set?

Kelley said...

Yeah, July 20. You'll be getting an invitation soon.